I am a student. This is a place where I will share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Summer, you have written a dramatic and emotional story. Your use of descriptive language has added to the strong feelings you are writing about, well done. You have a lot of detail about your characters and the setting they are. An interesting ending too!
Summer, you have written a dramatic and emotional story. Your use of descriptive language has added to the strong feelings you are writing about, well done. You have a lot of detail about your characters and the setting they are. An interesting ending too!
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