E-PORTFOLIO - Writing Term One

E-PORTFOLIO - Writing Term One

ACHIEVEMENT OBJECTIVES:

Structure:

L2: Organise texts, using a range of structures.

Indicators:

• Uses knowledge of word and sentence order to communicate meaning when creating text.
• Organises and sequences ideas and information with some confidence.
• Begins to use a variety of sentence structures, beginnings, and lengths.

L3: Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures

Indicators:

• Organises written ideas into paragraphs with increasing confidence.
• Uses a variety of sentence structures, beginnings, and lengths.

L4: Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures.

• Organise and sequences ideas and information for a particular purpose or effect;
• Uses a variety of sentences structures, beginnings, and lengths for effect.

Go through your writing and highlight examples of the following sentences.

Simple sentences - green

Compound sentences - yellow

Complex sentences - light blue

Insert your writing heresu

As I got my clothes ready to go  on the plane, I was so excited.  I have not been on a plane four

six years. Time to go, as my taxi pulled  up.  I got the money  to pay there was a key and I said never

 and moved on boom there was a sloth he took my luggage and I said come back that's mine he

 took it to the plane I said OK then I got on the plane but I have no idea the there was giraffes giving

 massages  to everyone poof! there was a koala asking if I wanted something to eat I said know

thanks  just juice as he walked off I went for a sleep four 2 hours. I woke up because a giraffe

 was massaging me, it was disgusting, her tongue was rough, hard and slobbery.